Title: investigating the mortality trend of gastrointestinal cancers in Babol, North Iran
(2013-2021)
Version: 1 Date: 30 Jan 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study  is  valuable  for health managers . For getting more valuable of results authors should
be considered following comments.
1- In abstract, in background and aim section, the reasons of why study are important should
be mentioned.
2- According to the title, the type of study is longitudinal.
3- The figures have been drawn with excel and it is necessary to mentioned in statistical packaged
used.
4- In the first paragraph have been mentioned "Men had a higher mortality rate from
gastrointestinal cancers than women (1.62:1 ratio)". But this results that are so important didn't
report in result and abstract. Also it is necessary that report with confidence interval.
5- In page 12, line 8. There are two sentences that are opposite and need the appropriate the
conjunction phrase.
6- In page 12, line 10 to 22 there are too "per hundred thousand" it needs to mention in the way
that do not  destroyed the meaning but remove the extra ones.
7- The discussion is too long, it is necessary to summarize it.
Title: investigating the mortality trend of gastrointestinal cancers in Babol, North Iran
(2013-2021)
Version: 1 Date: 30 Jan 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study  is  valuable  for health managers . For getting more valuable of results authors should
be considered following comments.
1- In abstract, in background and aim section, the reasons of why study are important should
be mentioned.
2- According to the title, the type of study is longitudinal.
3- The figures have been drawn with excel and it is necessary to mentioned in statistical packaged
used.
4- In the first paragraph have been mentioned "Men had a higher mortality rate from
gastrointestinal cancers than women (1.62:1 ratio)". But this results that are so important didn't
report in result and abstract. Also it is necessary that report with confidence interval.
5- In page 12, line 8. There are two sentences that are opposite and need the appropriate the
conjunction phrase.
6- In page 12, line 10 to 22 there are too "per hundred thousand" it needs to mention in the way
that do not  destroyed the meaning but remove the extra ones.
7- The discussion is too long, it is necessary to summarize it.
Please review this paper.
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Title: investigating the mortality trend of gastrointestinal cancers in Babol, North Iran
(2013-2021)
Version: 1 Date: 30 Jan 2024
Reviewer's report:
This study  is  valuable  for health managers . For getting more valuable of results authors should
be considered following comments.
1- In abstract, in background and aim section, the reasons of why study are important should
be mentioned.
2- According to the title, the type of study is longitudinal.
3- The figures have been drawn with excel and it is necessary to mentioned in statistical packaged
used.
4- In the first paragraph have been mentioned "Men had a higher mortality rate from
gastrointestinal cancers than women (1.62:1 ratio)". But this results that are so important didn't
report in result and abstract. Also it is necessary that report with confidence interval.
5- In page 12, line 8. There are two sentences that are opposite and need the appropriate the
conjunction phrase.
6- In page 12, line 10 to 22 there are too "per hundred thousand" it needs to mention in the way
that do not  destroyed the meaning but remove the extra ones.
7- The discussion is too long, it is necessary to summarize it.
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