Title: Potential Alternative and Novel Biomarkers for Paediatric MAFLD: exploratory evidence
from a Chinese cohort
Version: 4 Date: 20 Sep 2024
Reviewer:  Miriam Latorre-Millán
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
I believe that your work could be of high interest in the field. However, several major changes
are needed to complete and improve it, so that it can be properly published.
I strongly recommend a revision of the use of the English/American language, with special
attention to the terminology of the field and to improve the communicative effectiveness in
order to reach the reader's standards. For this last point, it is also highly recommended to include
additional information with more quality and detail in several sections to really know the extent
of the findings, and yet it is necessary to be more cautious not to overestimate it.
You can find my detailed comments (section by section) after my review in the attached file.
Yours sincerly,
MIriam Latorre-Millán
Title: Potential Alternative and Novel Biomarkers for Paediatric MAFLD: exploratory evidence
from a Chinese cohort
Version: 4 Date: 20 Sep 2024
Reviewer:  Miriam Latorre-Millán
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
I believe that your work could be of high interest in the field. However, several major changes
are needed to complete and improve it, so that it can be properly published.
I strongly recommend a revision of the use of the English/American language, with special
attention to the terminology of the field and to improve the communicative effectiveness in
order to reach the reader's standards. For this last point, it is also highly recommended to include
additional information with more quality and detail in several sections to really know the extent
of the findings, and yet it is necessary to be more cautious not to overestimate it.
You can find my detailed comments (section by section) after my review in the attached file.
Yours sincerly,
MIriam Latorre-Millán
Please review this paper.
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Title: Potential Alternative and Novel Biomarkers for Paediatric MAFLD: exploratory evidence
from a Chinese cohort
Version: 4 Date: 20 Sep 2024
Reviewer:  Miriam Latorre-Millán
Reviewer's report:
Dear authors,
I believe that your work could be of high interest in the field. However, several major changes
are needed to complete and improve it, so that it can be properly published.
I strongly recommend a revision of the use of the English/American language, with special
attention to the terminology of the field and to improve the communicative effectiveness in
order to reach the reader's standards. For this last point, it is also highly recommended to include
additional information with more quality and detail in several sections to really know the extent
of the findings, and yet it is necessary to be more cautious not to overestimate it.
You can find my detailed comments (section by section) after my review in the attached file.
Yours sincerly,
MIriam Latorre-Millán
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