Title: Gluten-Free Diet Adherence Patterns and Health Outcomes in Celiac Disease: A
Retrospective Observational Study
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jun 2025
Reviewer's report:
Minor revision – The manuscript is well-structured and valuable. It merits publication after
minor language editing and refinement of phrasing in a few areas for greater clarity and academic
tone.
The manuscript is largely readable and clear, but a light language polish is needed. Some
examples:
“they generally stated that the difficulty in following the prescribed diet was the primary
reason…” # consider: “most participants cited dietary difficulty as the main barrier…”
“after a while of adhering” # consider rephrasing to “after an initial period of adherence”
Terms like “mediate” instead of “moderate” for COVID-19 severity (Table 3) should be
corrected.
Use either “GFD” or “gluten-free diet” consistently when first introduced.
Tables include some repetition in variable labeling (e.g., Table 2 – “do not adherence” # “no
adherence”).
Worthy of publication after minor revision.
The study is methodologically sound, relevant, and thoughtfully discussed. With light language
corrections and a few technical clarifications, it will be a strong contribution to literature on
celiac disease management.
Title: Gluten-Free Diet Adherence Patterns and Health Outcomes in Celiac Disease: A
Retrospective Observational Study
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jun 2025
Reviewer's report:
Minor revision – The manuscript is well-structured and valuable. It merits publication after
minor language editing and refinement of phrasing in a few areas for greater clarity and academic
tone.
The manuscript is largely readable and clear, but a light language polish is needed. Some
examples:
“they generally stated that the difficulty in following the prescribed diet was the primary
reason…” # consider: “most participants cited dietary difficulty as the main barrier…”
“after a while of adhering” # consider rephrasing to “after an initial period of adherence”
Terms like “mediate” instead of “moderate” for COVID-19 severity (Table 3) should be
corrected.
Use either “GFD” or “gluten-free diet” consistently when first introduced.
Tables include some repetition in variable labeling (e.g., Table 2 – “do not adherence” # “no
adherence”).
Worthy of publication after minor revision.
The study is methodologically sound, relevant, and thoughtfully discussed. With light language
corrections and a few technical clarifications, it will be a strong contribution to literature on
celiac disease management.
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Gluten-Free Diet Adherence Patterns and Health Outcomes in Celiac Disease: A
Retrospective Observational Study
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jun 2025
Reviewer's report:
Minor revision – The manuscript is well-structured and valuable. It merits publication after
minor language editing and refinement of phrasing in a few areas for greater clarity and academic
tone.
The manuscript is largely readable and clear, but a light language polish is needed. Some
examples:
“they generally stated that the difficulty in following the prescribed diet was the primary
reason…” # consider: “most participants cited dietary difficulty as the main barrier…”
“after a while of adhering” # consider rephrasing to “after an initial period of adherence”
Terms like “mediate” instead of “moderate” for COVID-19 severity (Table 3) should be
corrected.
Use either “GFD” or “gluten-free diet” consistently when first introduced.
Tables include some repetition in variable labeling (e.g., Table 2 – “do not adherence” # “no
adherence”).
Worthy of publication after minor revision.
The study is methodologically sound, relevant, and thoughtfully discussed. With light language
corrections and a few technical clarifications, it will be a strong contribution to literature on
celiac disease management.
assistant