Reviewer's report
Title:Analysis of etiology and clinical characteristics of Jejunoileum hemorrhage
in China - A multicenter 10-years survey
Version: 3Date:23 March 2012
Reviewer: Lisheng Wang
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript, the authors analyzed the data from multiple centers to
highlight the causes and clinical characteristics of jejunoileum hemorrhage. The
authors stated that, in sharp contrast to the results in the previous reports from
the western countries, malignant tumors were found to be the major reason and
the patients presented as bleeding with abdominal pain. The results seem
interesting and might be indicative for the diagnosis and management of the
patients with small intestine bleeding. This reviewer has the following comments.
1. Though English of the manuscript is generally readable, there are too many
grammar errors to be corrected. This reviewer suggests that the authors should
rearrange the manuscript after critical reviewing from a native English speaker.
2. The discusses about the diagnostic means should be more detailed to point
out whether laparotomy is needed in this setting, based on the data here that
indicate that the main cause is malignant tumor.
3. The Y-axis of Fig1 and Fig2 should be labeled.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Reviewer's report
Title:Analysis of etiology and clinical characteristics of Jejunoileum hemorrhage
in China - A multicenter 10-years survey
Version: 3Date:23 March 2012
Reviewer: Lisheng Wang
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript, the authors analyzed the data from multiple centers to
highlight the causes and clinical characteristics of jejunoileum hemorrhage. The
authors stated that, in sharp contrast to the results in the previous reports from
the western countries, malignant tumors were found to be the major reason and
the patients presented as bleeding with abdominal pain. The results seem
interesting and might be indicative for the diagnosis and management of the
patients with small intestine bleeding. This reviewer has the following comments.
1. Though English of the manuscript is generally readable, there are too many
grammar errors to be corrected. This reviewer suggests that the authors should
rearrange the manuscript after critical reviewing from a native English speaker.
2. The discusses about the diagnostic means should be more detailed to point
out whether laparotomy is needed in this setting, based on the data here that
indicate that the main cause is malignant tumor.
3. The Y-axis of Fig1 and Fig2 should be labeled.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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Reviewer's report
Title:Analysis of etiology and clinical characteristics of Jejunoileum hemorrhage
in China - A multicenter 10-years survey
Version: 3Date:23 March 2012
Reviewer: Lisheng Wang
Reviewer's report:
In this manuscript, the authors analyzed the data from multiple centers to
highlight the causes and clinical characteristics of jejunoileum hemorrhage. The
authors stated that, in sharp contrast to the results in the previous reports from
the western countries, malignant tumors were found to be the major reason and
the patients presented as bleeding with abdominal pain. The results seem
interesting and might be indicative for the diagnosis and management of the
patients with small intestine bleeding. This reviewer has the following comments.
1. Though English of the manuscript is generally readable, there are too many
grammar errors to be corrected. This reviewer suggests that the authors should
rearrange the manuscript after critical reviewing from a native English speaker.
2. The discusses about the diagnostic means should be more detailed to point
out whether laparotomy is needed in this setting, based on the data here that
indicate that the main cause is malignant tumor.
3. The Y-axis of Fig1 and Fig2 should be labeled.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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