Title: Host cytokine genetic polymorphisms in a selected population of persons living with
hepatitis B virus infection in the Central Region of Ghana
Version: 7 Date: 10 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
There are many run on sentences, with convoluted meaning. These need to be recast.
There are many grammatical errors that may be identified and sorted out with the help of
professional editing service.
My main concern is that the frequency of cytokine variations do not show a causative effect;
rather an association may be recognised.
In the same way adducing a protective effect to any cytokine variant with this study design can
only be an educated guess and should be reported as such.
Title: Host cytokine genetic polymorphisms in a selected population of persons living with
hepatitis B virus infection in the Central Region of Ghana
Version: 7 Date: 10 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
There are many run on sentences, with convoluted meaning. These need to be recast.
There are many grammatical errors that may be identified and sorted out with the help of
professional editing service.
My main concern is that the frequency of cytokine variations do not show a causative effect;
rather an association may be recognised.
In the same way adducing a protective effect to any cytokine variant with this study design can
only be an educated guess and should be reported as such.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Host cytokine genetic polymorphisms in a selected population of persons living with
hepatitis B virus infection in the Central Region of Ghana
Version: 7 Date: 10 Sep 2024
Reviewer's report:
There are many run on sentences, with convoluted meaning. These need to be recast.
There are many grammatical errors that may be identified and sorted out with the help of
professional editing service.
My main concern is that the frequency of cytokine variations do not show a causative effect;
rather an association may be recognised.
In the same way adducing a protective effect to any cytokine variant with this study design can
only be an educated guess and should be reported as such.
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