Reviewer's report
Title:The Clinical Presentations Of Ectopic Biliary Drainage with a Review of the
Literature
Version: 4Date:22 October 2009
Reviewer: omar shah
Reviewer's report:
Though the authors have modified this manuscript as per any suggestion, I still
feel that it is not yet fit for publication.
Major Compulsory Revisions
Abstract:
• Reduce the text and be more focused on what you think is the theme of this
paper.
Introduction:
• Reduced and rephrase the text.
Result Section:
• It is far too long and confusing.
• Draw a sketch showing ectopic drainage of bile duct.
• Description of findings may be considerably reduced by referring to tables.
Discussion:
• It is exhaustive and needs drastic reduction in size.
• English language needs editing
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
'I declare that I have no competing interests
Reviewer's report
Title:The Clinical Presentations Of Ectopic Biliary Drainage with a Review of the
Literature
Version: 4Date:22 October 2009
Reviewer: omar shah
Reviewer's report:
Though the authors have modified this manuscript as per any suggestion, I still
feel that it is not yet fit for publication.
Major Compulsory Revisions
Abstract:
• Reduce the text and be more focused on what you think is the theme of this
paper.
Introduction:
• Reduced and rephrase the text.
Result Section:
• It is far too long and confusing.
• Draw a sketch showing ectopic drainage of bile duct.
• Description of findings may be considerably reduced by referring to tables.
Discussion:
• It is exhaustive and needs drastic reduction in size.
• English language needs editing
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
'I declare that I have no competing interests
Please review this paper.
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Reviewer's report
Title:The Clinical Presentations Of Ectopic Biliary Drainage with a Review of the
Literature
Version: 4Date:22 October 2009
Reviewer: omar shah
Reviewer's report:
Though the authors have modified this manuscript as per any suggestion, I still
feel that it is not yet fit for publication.
Major Compulsory Revisions
Abstract:
• Reduce the text and be more focused on what you think is the theme of this
paper.
Introduction:
• Reduced and rephrase the text.
Result Section:
• It is far too long and confusing.
• Draw a sketch showing ectopic drainage of bile duct.
• Description of findings may be considerably reduced by referring to tables.
Discussion:
• It is exhaustive and needs drastic reduction in size.
• English language needs editing
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
'I declare that I have no competing interests
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