Title: Epidemiology and Outcomes of Choledocholithiasis and Cholangitis in the United States:
Trends and Urban-Rural Variations
Version: 1 Date: 27 Apr 2023
Reviewer's report:
- The report was quite thorough; I'm familiar with NIS, so appreciate mention of the co-variables,
adjustment for confounders, and sensitivity analysis
- A few edits to recommend:
1. Page 5, remove colon in line 17
2. Page 6, line, what is meant to come after inclusive? Or reword the sentence so that it is
complete.
3. Page 7 line 4, add 'the' before hospital
4. Page 7 line 16, AE should be spelled out for first mention in a paper
5. From page 12, lines 19-20, through page 14- all aOR should include p value in the text
Title: Epidemiology and Outcomes of Choledocholithiasis and Cholangitis in the United States:
Trends and Urban-Rural Variations
Version: 1 Date: 27 Apr 2023
Reviewer's report:
- The report was quite thorough; I'm familiar with NIS, so appreciate mention of the co-variables,
adjustment for confounders, and sensitivity analysis
- A few edits to recommend:
1. Page 5, remove colon in line 17
2. Page 6, line, what is meant to come after inclusive? Or reword the sentence so that it is
complete.
3. Page 7 line 4, add 'the' before hospital
4. Page 7 line 16, AE should be spelled out for first mention in a paper
5. From page 12, lines 19-20, through page 14- all aOR should include p value in the text
Please review this paper.
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Title: Epidemiology and Outcomes of Choledocholithiasis and Cholangitis in the United States:
Trends and Urban-Rural Variations
Version: 1 Date: 27 Apr 2023
Reviewer's report:
- The report was quite thorough; I'm familiar with NIS, so appreciate mention of the co-variables,
adjustment for confounders, and sensitivity analysis
- A few edits to recommend:
1. Page 5, remove colon in line 17
2. Page 6, line, what is meant to come after inclusive? Or reword the sentence so that it is
complete.
3. Page 7 line 4, add 'the' before hospital
4. Page 7 line 16, AE should be spelled out for first mention in a paper
5. From page 12, lines 19-20, through page 14- all aOR should include p value in the text
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