Title: Daily Sodium Intake and Constipation in US Adult Males: An Uncommon Negative
Association Revealed by National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey Data from the
United States (2005–2010)
Version: 0 Date: 09 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
it was interesting idea  and i enjoyed reading paper. some changes help you to have a very perfect
paper.
-The discussion sometimes repeats the same point (e.g., the negative association between sodium
intake and constipation) without adding new information
-The mechanisms underlying the association are presented as a list. While this is helpful,
discussing each mechanism in a more integrated manner might improve clarity and coherence.
Instead of a numbered list, consider more integrated paragraphs that discuss the mechanisms in
relation to the study's findings
-The conclusion reiterates some points without summarizing the implications of the study
effectively. Consider including a more definitive statement on the significance of the findings
and suggestions for future research.
-The passage generally maintains present tense when discussing findings, but past tense may
be more appropriate when referring to previous studies (e.g., "Rollet et al. investigated" rather
than "Rollet et al. investigates").
-Some sentences may benefit from additional commas to enhance readability (e.g., separating
clauses). For instance: "Moreover, we employed multivariable logistic regression models in our
analysis, adjusting for multiple confounders, which ensured the robustness of our results."
-Certain phrases could be streamlined to avoid redundancy. For example, "suggesting that
increasing daily sodium intake may be linked to a decreased likelihood of constipation" could
simply refer to "suggesting a link between increasing sodium intake and decreased likelihood
of constipation."
Title: Daily Sodium Intake and Constipation in US Adult Males: An Uncommon Negative
Association Revealed by National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey Data from the
United States (2005–2010)
Version: 0 Date: 09 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
it was interesting idea  and i enjoyed reading paper. some changes help you to have a very perfect
paper.
-The discussion sometimes repeats the same point (e.g., the negative association between sodium
intake and constipation) without adding new information
-The mechanisms underlying the association are presented as a list. While this is helpful,
discussing each mechanism in a more integrated manner might improve clarity and coherence.
Instead of a numbered list, consider more integrated paragraphs that discuss the mechanisms in
relation to the study's findings
-The conclusion reiterates some points without summarizing the implications of the study
effectively. Consider including a more definitive statement on the significance of the findings
and suggestions for future research.
-The passage generally maintains present tense when discussing findings, but past tense may
be more appropriate when referring to previous studies (e.g., "Rollet et al. investigated" rather
than "Rollet et al. investigates").
-Some sentences may benefit from additional commas to enhance readability (e.g., separating
clauses). For instance: "Moreover, we employed multivariable logistic regression models in our
analysis, adjusting for multiple confounders, which ensured the robustness of our results."
-Certain phrases could be streamlined to avoid redundancy. For example, "suggesting that
increasing daily sodium intake may be linked to a decreased likelihood of constipation" could
simply refer to "suggesting a link between increasing sodium intake and decreased likelihood
of constipation."
Please review this paper.
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Title: Daily Sodium Intake and Constipation in US Adult Males: An Uncommon Negative
Association Revealed by National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey Data from the
United States (2005–2010)
Version: 0 Date: 09 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
it was interesting idea  and i enjoyed reading paper. some changes help you to have a very perfect
paper.
-The discussion sometimes repeats the same point (e.g., the negative association between sodium
intake and constipation) without adding new information
-The mechanisms underlying the association are presented as a list. While this is helpful,
discussing each mechanism in a more integrated manner might improve clarity and coherence.
Instead of a numbered list, consider more integrated paragraphs that discuss the mechanisms in
relation to the study's findings
-The conclusion reiterates some points without summarizing the implications of the study
effectively. Consider including a more definitive statement on the significance of the findings
and suggestions for future research.
-The passage generally maintains present tense when discussing findings, but past tense may
be more appropriate when referring to previous studies (e.g., "Rollet et al. investigated" rather
than "Rollet et al. investigates").
-Some sentences may benefit from additional commas to enhance readability (e.g., separating
clauses). For instance: "Moreover, we employed multivariable logistic regression models in our
analysis, adjusting for multiple confounders, which ensured the robustness of our results."
-Certain phrases could be streamlined to avoid redundancy. For example, "suggesting that
increasing daily sodium intake may be linked to a decreased likelihood of constipation" could
simply refer to "suggesting a link between increasing sodium intake and decreased likelihood
of constipation."
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