Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of general anesthesia on gastric myoelectric activity in
experimental pigs
Version: 1Date:5 December 2012
Reviewer: Chris Mulder
Reviewer's report:
Page 2
Abstract:
Conlusion: “i.v. thiopental seems to be the most appropriate”: My question is for
what? Your conclusion now is unclear for the majority of readers.
Page 3
Abstract:
You introduction gives better answers for what to conclude in conclusion section
of the abstract!
Page 9
“Thus they can be used safely for preclinical studies using EGG in experimental
pigs”
• You must state: preclinical studies “with drugs” or with what
• Overall nice study: should be accepted with more clear message at the end.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of general anesthesia on gastric myoelectric activity in
experimental pigs
Version: 1Date:5 December 2012
Reviewer: Chris Mulder
Reviewer's report:
Page 2
Abstract:
Conlusion: “i.v. thiopental seems to be the most appropriate”: My question is for
what? Your conclusion now is unclear for the majority of readers.
Page 3
Abstract:
You introduction gives better answers for what to conclude in conclusion section
of the abstract!
Page 9
“Thus they can be used safely for preclinical studies using EGG in experimental
pigs”
• You must state: preclinical studies “with drugs” or with what
• Overall nice study: should be accepted with more clear message at the end.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Please review this paper.
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Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of general anesthesia on gastric myoelectric activity in
experimental pigs
Version: 1Date:5 December 2012
Reviewer: Chris Mulder
Reviewer's report:
Page 2
Abstract:
Conlusion: “i.v. thiopental seems to be the most appropriate”: My question is for
what? Your conclusion now is unclear for the majority of readers.
Page 3
Abstract:
You introduction gives better answers for what to conclude in conclusion section
of the abstract!
Page 9
“Thus they can be used safely for preclinical studies using EGG in experimental
pigs”
• You must state: preclinical studies “with drugs” or with what
• Overall nice study: should be accepted with more clear message at the end.
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
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