Title: Non-Foreign Body-Associated Risk Factors for Complications Associated with
Esophageal Foreign-Body Removal and Timing of Endoscopic Treatment: A Single-Center
Retrospective Study
Version: 1 Date: 18 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
In the background section, the authors should elaborate on the data to support why this study is
important, apart from the lack of research in this field.
The cause-effect relationship between non-foreign body factors and the risk of mucosal
injury, perforation, and mucosal bleeding should be rationally explained and supported by the
references. For instance, in lines 247-249, the specific references did not support the statement,
and appropriate references did not support the other statement in lines 253-255.
The authors could refer to the following article:
Kadriyan H, Primayanti I, Syamsidar S et al. Case Report: Modified endoscopic hook
for extracting magnetic esophageal foreign bodies in a rural area (https://doi.org/10.12688/
f1000research.129564.3)
DOI: https://doi.org/10.4166/kjg.2018.72.1.1
Title: Non-Foreign Body-Associated Risk Factors for Complications Associated with
Esophageal Foreign-Body Removal and Timing of Endoscopic Treatment: A Single-Center
Retrospective Study
Version: 1 Date: 18 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
In the background section, the authors should elaborate on the data to support why this study is
important, apart from the lack of research in this field.
The cause-effect relationship between non-foreign body factors and the risk of mucosal
injury, perforation, and mucosal bleeding should be rationally explained and supported by the
references. For instance, in lines 247-249, the specific references did not support the statement,
and appropriate references did not support the other statement in lines 253-255.
The authors could refer to the following article:
Kadriyan H, Primayanti I, Syamsidar S et al. Case Report: Modified endoscopic hook
for extracting magnetic esophageal foreign bodies in a rural area (https://doi.org/10.12688/
f1000research.129564.3)
DOI: https://doi.org/10.4166/kjg.2018.72.1.1
Please review this paper.
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Title: Non-Foreign Body-Associated Risk Factors for Complications Associated with
Esophageal Foreign-Body Removal and Timing of Endoscopic Treatment: A Single-Center
Retrospective Study
Version: 1 Date: 18 Oct 2024
Reviewer's report:
In the background section, the authors should elaborate on the data to support why this study is
important, apart from the lack of research in this field.
The cause-effect relationship between non-foreign body factors and the risk of mucosal
injury, perforation, and mucosal bleeding should be rationally explained and supported by the
references. For instance, in lines 247-249, the specific references did not support the statement,
and appropriate references did not support the other statement in lines 253-255.
The authors could refer to the following article:
Kadriyan H, Primayanti I, Syamsidar S et al. Case Report: Modified endoscopic hook
for extracting magnetic esophageal foreign bodies in a rural area (https://doi.org/10.12688/
f1000research.129564.3)
DOI: https://doi.org/10.4166/kjg.2018.72.1.1
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