Title: Efficacy of endoscopic gastrojejunal bypass in obese Yucatan pigs: a comparative animal
study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Oct 2022
Reviewer:  Ivo Boškoski
Reviewer's report:
This is an experimental comparative study on four different types of endoscopic gastrojejunal
bypass in obese Yucatan pigs. Besides some small grammatical errors, the study has a valid
scientific concept ad brings novelty to treating obesity as a chronic, relapsing, multifactorial and
degenerative disease. Overall, this NOTES concept is of big importance.
Suggestions: it would be nice to have a graphical explanation of the complete endoscopic
procedure and figures in real life.
For better understanding, please insert a flowchart of the groups and relative numbers.
Title: Efficacy of endoscopic gastrojejunal bypass in obese Yucatan pigs: a comparative animal
study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Oct 2022
Reviewer:  Ivo Boškoski
Reviewer's report:
This is an experimental comparative study on four different types of endoscopic gastrojejunal
bypass in obese Yucatan pigs. Besides some small grammatical errors, the study has a valid
scientific concept ad brings novelty to treating obesity as a chronic, relapsing, multifactorial and
degenerative disease. Overall, this NOTES concept is of big importance.
Suggestions: it would be nice to have a graphical explanation of the complete endoscopic
procedure and figures in real life.
For better understanding, please insert a flowchart of the groups and relative numbers.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Efficacy of endoscopic gastrojejunal bypass in obese Yucatan pigs: a comparative animal
study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Oct 2022
Reviewer:  Ivo Boškoski
Reviewer's report:
This is an experimental comparative study on four different types of endoscopic gastrojejunal
bypass in obese Yucatan pigs. Besides some small grammatical errors, the study has a valid
scientific concept ad brings novelty to treating obesity as a chronic, relapsing, multifactorial and
degenerative disease. Overall, this NOTES concept is of big importance.
Suggestions: it would be nice to have a graphical explanation of the complete endoscopic
procedure and figures in real life.
For better understanding, please insert a flowchart of the groups and relative numbers.
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