Title: Usefulness of the combined orthodontic rubber band and clip method for gastric
endoscopic submucosal dissection
Version: 2 Date: 16 Nov 2022
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read the revised manuscript. The authors have
addressed issues reviewers raised, but I would still like to confirm two points as below.
Major issues #2
Thank you for addressing major issue #2 I raised. Please consider adding your explanation to
“The ESD procedure” in MATERIALS AND METHODS. In addition, I would suggest adding
Fig. 3 (Schematic illustration of retroflexed endoscopic position for submucosal dissection)
described in your Response letter to the revised manuscript to help readers understand the ORB-
ESD procedure.
Minor issue #2
Thank you for addressing minor issue #2 I raised. You have clarified the specific situations
where the ORB traction may not work well. This is a crucial point, so I would appreciate it if
you could add your explanation to the Discussion of the revised manuscript.
Title: Usefulness of the combined orthodontic rubber band and clip method for gastric
endoscopic submucosal dissection
Version: 2 Date: 16 Nov 2022
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read the revised manuscript. The authors have
addressed issues reviewers raised, but I would still like to confirm two points as below.
Major issues #2
Thank you for addressing major issue #2 I raised. Please consider adding your explanation to
“The ESD procedure” in MATERIALS AND METHODS. In addition, I would suggest adding
Fig. 3 (Schematic illustration of retroflexed endoscopic position for submucosal dissection)
described in your Response letter to the revised manuscript to help readers understand the ORB-
ESD procedure.
Minor issue #2
Thank you for addressing minor issue #2 I raised. You have clarified the specific situations
where the ORB traction may not work well. This is a crucial point, so I would appreciate it if
you could add your explanation to the Discussion of the revised manuscript.
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Usefulness of the combined orthodontic rubber band and clip method for gastric
endoscopic submucosal dissection
Version: 2 Date: 16 Nov 2022
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read the revised manuscript. The authors have
addressed issues reviewers raised, but I would still like to confirm two points as below.
Major issues #2
Thank you for addressing major issue #2 I raised. Please consider adding your explanation to
“The ESD procedure” in MATERIALS AND METHODS. In addition, I would suggest adding
Fig. 3 (Schematic illustration of retroflexed endoscopic position for submucosal dissection)
described in your Response letter to the revised manuscript to help readers understand the ORB-
ESD procedure.
Minor issue #2
Thank you for addressing minor issue #2 I raised. You have clarified the specific situations
where the ORB traction may not work well. This is a crucial point, so I would appreciate it if
you could add your explanation to the Discussion of the revised manuscript.
assistant