Title: Outcomes of endoscopic submucosal dissection for gastroesophageal reflux disease
(ESD-G) for medication-refractory gastroesophageal reflux disease: 35 cases underwent ESD-
G including 15 cases followed more than 5 years.
Version: 1 Date: 18 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript reported the utility of ESD-G for refractory GERD.
This technique seems to be useful for this kind of situation. However, there are some problems
before publication.
1. In this manuscript, there are few tables. So the results of this study is difficult to understand.
Author should make representative table for easy understanding.
2. In this method, how to decide the area to resect is important. Author should state the method
of this treatment more clearly.
3. The indication of this treatment is very important. Author should state the indication of this
treatment in the method section.
4. In this manuscript, author submitted the figure of endoscopic images before and after this
procedure in the antegrade position. I think endoscopic image of retrograde position is also
important, so author should provide the image of retrograde position.
Title: Outcomes of endoscopic submucosal dissection for gastroesophageal reflux disease
(ESD-G) for medication-refractory gastroesophageal reflux disease: 35 cases underwent ESD-
G including 15 cases followed more than 5 years.
Version: 1 Date: 18 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript reported the utility of ESD-G for refractory GERD.
This technique seems to be useful for this kind of situation. However, there are some problems
before publication.
1. In this manuscript, there are few tables. So the results of this study is difficult to understand.
Author should make representative table for easy understanding.
2. In this method, how to decide the area to resect is important. Author should state the method
of this treatment more clearly.
3. The indication of this treatment is very important. Author should state the indication of this
treatment in the method section.
4. In this manuscript, author submitted the figure of endoscopic images before and after this
procedure in the antegrade position. I think endoscopic image of retrograde position is also
important, so author should provide the image of retrograde position.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Outcomes of endoscopic submucosal dissection for gastroesophageal reflux disease
(ESD-G) for medication-refractory gastroesophageal reflux disease: 35 cases underwent ESD-
G including 15 cases followed more than 5 years.
Version: 1 Date: 18 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript reported the utility of ESD-G for refractory GERD.
This technique seems to be useful for this kind of situation. However, there are some problems
before publication.
1. In this manuscript, there are few tables. So the results of this study is difficult to understand.
Author should make representative table for easy understanding.
2. In this method, how to decide the area to resect is important. Author should state the method
of this treatment more clearly.
3. The indication of this treatment is very important. Author should state the indication of this
treatment in the method section.
4. In this manuscript, author submitted the figure of endoscopic images before and after this
procedure in the antegrade position. I think endoscopic image of retrograde position is also
important, so author should provide the image of retrograde position.
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