Title: Glucocorticoids in Acute Pancreatitis: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis
Version: 4 Date: 07 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
The writting should be further improved.
In the Result part of Abstract section, the abbreviation "APACHE II" should be followed by the
full name "Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II".
In the Result part of Abstract section, the authors said “The incidence of multi-organ failure”.
However, the authors said “prevalence of multiple organ dysfunction” in line 222 of the
manuscript. The manuscript should be carefully checked.
In the background section, the research progress of glucocorticoids in the treatment of acute
pancreatitis with hypertriglyceridemia should be provided. This can support your study results.
The Ethics number should be provided in Methods section.
Subheading titles should be given in the Results section.
In the Result section, the authors said “After matching, patients in the GC group had a lower
heart rate than those in the NGC group (110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”. should be
revised as “After matching, the heart rate was no significant difference between the two groups
(110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”.
Figure 1 is represented by a line chart, the results of the study may be clearer.
marshall score, BISAP should be explored in the results section.
Title: Glucocorticoids in Acute Pancreatitis: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis
Version: 4 Date: 07 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
The writting should be further improved.
In the Result part of Abstract section, the abbreviation "APACHE II" should be followed by the
full name "Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II".
In the Result part of Abstract section, the authors said “The incidence of multi-organ failure”.
However, the authors said “prevalence of multiple organ dysfunction” in line 222 of the
manuscript. The manuscript should be carefully checked.
In the background section, the research progress of glucocorticoids in the treatment of acute
pancreatitis with hypertriglyceridemia should be provided. This can support your study results.
The Ethics number should be provided in Methods section.
Subheading titles should be given in the Results section.
In the Result section, the authors said “After matching, patients in the GC group had a lower
heart rate than those in the NGC group (110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”. should be
revised as “After matching, the heart rate was no significant difference between the two groups
(110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”.
Figure 1 is represented by a line chart, the results of the study may be clearer.
marshall score, BISAP should be explored in the results section.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Glucocorticoids in Acute Pancreatitis: A Propensity Score Matching Analysis
Version: 4 Date: 07 Jun 2021
Reviewer's report:
The writting should be further improved.
In the Result part of Abstract section, the abbreviation "APACHE II" should be followed by the
full name "Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II".
In the Result part of Abstract section, the authors said “The incidence of multi-organ failure”.
However, the authors said “prevalence of multiple organ dysfunction” in line 222 of the
manuscript. The manuscript should be carefully checked.
In the background section, the research progress of glucocorticoids in the treatment of acute
pancreatitis with hypertriglyceridemia should be provided. This can support your study results.
The Ethics number should be provided in Methods section.
Subheading titles should be given in the Results section.
In the Result section, the authors said “After matching, patients in the GC group had a lower
heart rate than those in the NGC group (110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”. should be
revised as “After matching, the heart rate was no significant difference between the two groups
(110.9 ± 10.7 vs. 119.4 ± 12.7, P = 0.374)”.
Figure 1 is represented by a line chart, the results of the study may be clearer.
marshall score, BISAP should be explored in the results section.
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