Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of enteral and parenteral feeding on secretion of orexigenic
peptides in infants
Version: 3Date:19 August 2009
Reviewer: Mylene Perreault
Reviewer's report:
1- The quality of the written English still needs to be addressed:
Background: “The breast feeding of newborns and infants declines a risk of
overweight since the second year, improves lipid profile and lowers blood
pressure in the further life [25-28,]. Likely, way of feeding alters gut-brain axis
and generates short and long time differences in the development.” Should be
changed to: “Breast feeding newborns and infants improves lipid profile and
lowers blood pressure in later life and decreases the risk of developing obesity
[25-28]. Likely, the way of feeding alters the gut-brain axis and generates short
and long term differences in the infant development.
Background: “Fasting and postprandial levels of ghrelin and OXA in plasma in
nursed
infants, infants fed with milk formula, babies maintaining on a hypoallergic, highly
hydrolyzed diet as well as in children on the total parenteral nutrition determined
in this study contribute to that problem.” Should be changed to: “Fasting and
postprandial plasma levels of ghrelin and OXA in nursed infants, formula-fed
infants, babies maintained on a hypoallergic highly hydrolyzed diet or children on
total parenteral nutrition were determined in this study.”
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of enteral and parenteral feeding on secretion of orexigenic
peptides in infants
Version: 3Date:19 August 2009
Reviewer: Mylene Perreault
Reviewer's report:
1- The quality of the written English still needs to be addressed:
Background: “The breast feeding of newborns and infants declines a risk of
overweight since the second year, improves lipid profile and lowers blood
pressure in the further life [25-28,]. Likely, way of feeding alters gut-brain axis
and generates short and long time differences in the development.” Should be
changed to: “Breast feeding newborns and infants improves lipid profile and
lowers blood pressure in later life and decreases the risk of developing obesity
[25-28]. Likely, the way of feeding alters the gut-brain axis and generates short
and long term differences in the infant development.
Background: “Fasting and postprandial levels of ghrelin and OXA in plasma in
nursed
infants, infants fed with milk formula, babies maintaining on a hypoallergic, highly
hydrolyzed diet as well as in children on the total parenteral nutrition determined
in this study contribute to that problem.” Should be changed to: “Fasting and
postprandial plasma levels of ghrelin and OXA in nursed infants, formula-fed
infants, babies maintained on a hypoallergic highly hydrolyzed diet or children on
total parenteral nutrition were determined in this study.”
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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Reviewer's report
Title:The effect of enteral and parenteral feeding on secretion of orexigenic
peptides in infants
Version: 3Date:19 August 2009
Reviewer: Mylene Perreault
Reviewer's report:
1- The quality of the written English still needs to be addressed:
Background: “The breast feeding of newborns and infants declines a risk of
overweight since the second year, improves lipid profile and lowers blood
pressure in the further life [25-28,]. Likely, way of feeding alters gut-brain axis
and generates short and long time differences in the development.” Should be
changed to: “Breast feeding newborns and infants improves lipid profile and
lowers blood pressure in later life and decreases the risk of developing obesity
[25-28]. Likely, the way of feeding alters the gut-brain axis and generates short
and long term differences in the infant development.
Background: “Fasting and postprandial levels of ghrelin and OXA in plasma in
nursed
infants, infants fed with milk formula, babies maintaining on a hypoallergic, highly
hydrolyzed diet as well as in children on the total parenteral nutrition determined
in this study contribute to that problem.” Should be changed to: “Fasting and
postprandial plasma levels of ghrelin and OXA in nursed infants, formula-fed
infants, babies maintained on a hypoallergic highly hydrolyzed diet or children on
total parenteral nutrition were determined in this study.”
Level of interest: An article of importance in its field
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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