Title: Risk factors for gastroesophageal reflux disease: a population-based study
Version: 0 Date: 08 Dec 2023
Reviewer's report:
Table 2 of your study's findings indicates that consuming more dairy and high fiber is linked
to a lower incidence of GERD. However, there are instances where this finding is presented
in opposition to the results, as in Line 2 of paragraph 5 of the discussion, and line 6 abstract's
results section. These passages need to be updated.
According to the findings stated in the tables, there is a significant association between sleep
duration and GERD, but this finding has not been considered in the article.
Background
Line 3 should be "common symptoms of reflux" rather than "common causes."
Measurements
Correction needed for paragraph 1 of line 4 (stomach to the esophagus in the esophagus).
Ethics clearance and participation consent
Eliminate the redundant text, "All procedures were conducted in accordance with applicable
rules and regulations."
Table
Instead of drinking, write "drinking alcohol" in the table.
Title: Risk factors for gastroesophageal reflux disease: a population-based study
Version: 0 Date: 08 Dec 2023
Reviewer's report:
Table 2 of your study's findings indicates that consuming more dairy and high fiber is linked
to a lower incidence of GERD. However, there are instances where this finding is presented
in opposition to the results, as in Line 2 of paragraph 5 of the discussion, and line 6 abstract's
results section. These passages need to be updated.
According to the findings stated in the tables, there is a significant association between sleep
duration and GERD, but this finding has not been considered in the article.
Background
Line 3 should be "common symptoms of reflux" rather than "common causes."
Measurements
Correction needed for paragraph 1 of line 4 (stomach to the esophagus in the esophagus).
Ethics clearance and participation consent
Eliminate the redundant text, "All procedures were conducted in accordance with applicable
rules and regulations."
Table
Instead of drinking, write "drinking alcohol" in the table.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Risk factors for gastroesophageal reflux disease: a population-based study
Version: 0 Date: 08 Dec 2023
Reviewer's report:
Table 2 of your study's findings indicates that consuming more dairy and high fiber is linked
to a lower incidence of GERD. However, there are instances where this finding is presented
in opposition to the results, as in Line 2 of paragraph 5 of the discussion, and line 6 abstract's
results section. These passages need to be updated.
According to the findings stated in the tables, there is a significant association between sleep
duration and GERD, but this finding has not been considered in the article.
Background
Line 3 should be "common symptoms of reflux" rather than "common causes."
Measurements
Correction needed for paragraph 1 of line 4 (stomach to the esophagus in the esophagus).
Ethics clearance and participation consent
Eliminate the redundant text, "All procedures were conducted in accordance with applicable
rules and regulations."
Table
Instead of drinking, write "drinking alcohol" in the table.
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