Title: A safe and simple exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver
resection of segment 7
Version: 2 Date: 05 May 2023
Reviewer:  Menggang Liu
Reviewer's report:
I have read with interest the article by Nan You and colleagues entitled “A safe and simple
exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver resection of segment 7”. The
authors propose an interesting technique for improve the exposuring of S7 and bleeding control.
The authors are to be congratulated for the great effort in producing an original report on a new
technique that contributes to the present literature in this particular field. I agree to publish the
article. However, some aspects that should be revised.
Comments
1.Results should be interpreted with caution; some bias could be introduced by sample size and
selection. Study limitations should be described and summarized in Discussion section.
2.Can this technique be used in other segment?
3.Were all patients discussed before treatment in a Multidisciplinary Tumor Board? Please
clarify.
4.If this was a retrospective study, why not evaluate more patients over a longer period of time?
5.English language usage in the manuscript should be revised. There are some important
grammatical errors.
Title: A safe and simple exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver
resection of segment 7
Version: 2 Date: 05 May 2023
Reviewer:  Menggang Liu
Reviewer's report:
I have read with interest the article by Nan You and colleagues entitled “A safe and simple
exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver resection of segment 7”. The
authors propose an interesting technique for improve the exposuring of S7 and bleeding control.
The authors are to be congratulated for the great effort in producing an original report on a new
technique that contributes to the present literature in this particular field. I agree to publish the
article. However, some aspects that should be revised.
Comments
1.Results should be interpreted with caution; some bias could be introduced by sample size and
selection. Study limitations should be described and summarized in Discussion section.
2.Can this technique be used in other segment?
3.Were all patients discussed before treatment in a Multidisciplinary Tumor Board? Please
clarify.
4.If this was a retrospective study, why not evaluate more patients over a longer period of time?
5.English language usage in the manuscript should be revised. There are some important
grammatical errors.
Please review this paper.
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Title: A safe and simple exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver
resection of segment 7
Version: 2 Date: 05 May 2023
Reviewer:  Menggang Liu
Reviewer's report:
I have read with interest the article by Nan You and colleagues entitled “A safe and simple
exposure and Pringle maneuver in laparoscopic anatomical liver resection of segment 7”. The
authors propose an interesting technique for improve the exposuring of S7 and bleeding control.
The authors are to be congratulated for the great effort in producing an original report on a new
technique that contributes to the present literature in this particular field. I agree to publish the
article. However, some aspects that should be revised.
Comments
1.Results should be interpreted with caution; some bias could be introduced by sample size and
selection. Study limitations should be described and summarized in Discussion section.
2.Can this technique be used in other segment?
3.Were all patients discussed before treatment in a Multidisciplinary Tumor Board? Please
clarify.
4.If this was a retrospective study, why not evaluate more patients over a longer period of time?
5.English language usage in the manuscript should be revised. There are some important
grammatical errors.
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