Title: Association of Thromboelastography Profile with Severity of Liver Cirrhosis and Portal
Venous System Thrombosis
Version: 3 Date: 13 May 2021
Reviewer's report:
Although almost ready for publication this manuscript needs further proofreading.My comments
are as follows:
Page 4, Line 72. Instead of “patients who received the drugs with documented impact on
coagulation status” authors should write “patients who received drugs with documented impact
on coagulation status” (without the word  ‘’the ‘’ before the word ‘’ drugs’’)
Page 10, Lines 211-213. The statement “TEG can provide comprehensive information about
function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants, PLT, and cells and their interactions” is
not clear and could be replaced by the statement ‘’ TEG can provide comprehensive information
about function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants and PLTs as well as their
interactions’’
Page 11, Lines 239-240. Please rephrase the statement  “Notably, Huang et al. only included
the patients with the presence of gastroesophageal varices alone, but we did not limit the
complications or severity of liver cirrhosis” .It could be replaced by  the statement “Notably,
Huang et al.  included only patients with gastroesophageal varices  but we also included patients
with other complications of  liver cirrhosis ”
Title: Association of Thromboelastography Profile with Severity of Liver Cirrhosis and Portal
Venous System Thrombosis
Version: 3 Date: 13 May 2021
Reviewer's report:
Although almost ready for publication this manuscript needs further proofreading.My comments
are as follows:
Page 4, Line 72. Instead of “patients who received the drugs with documented impact on
coagulation status” authors should write “patients who received drugs with documented impact
on coagulation status” (without the word  ‘’the ‘’ before the word ‘’ drugs’’)
Page 10, Lines 211-213. The statement “TEG can provide comprehensive information about
function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants, PLT, and cells and their interactions” is
not clear and could be replaced by the statement ‘’ TEG can provide comprehensive information
about function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants and PLTs as well as their
interactions’’
Page 11, Lines 239-240. Please rephrase the statement  “Notably, Huang et al. only included
the patients with the presence of gastroesophageal varices alone, but we did not limit the
complications or severity of liver cirrhosis” .It could be replaced by  the statement “Notably,
Huang et al.  included only patients with gastroesophageal varices  but we also included patients
with other complications of  liver cirrhosis ”
Please review this paper.
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Title: Association of Thromboelastography Profile with Severity of Liver Cirrhosis and Portal
Venous System Thrombosis
Version: 3 Date: 13 May 2021
Reviewer's report:
Although almost ready for publication this manuscript needs further proofreading.My comments
are as follows:
Page 4, Line 72. Instead of “patients who received the drugs with documented impact on
coagulation status” authors should write “patients who received drugs with documented impact
on coagulation status” (without the word  ‘’the ‘’ before the word ‘’ drugs’’)
Page 10, Lines 211-213. The statement “TEG can provide comprehensive information about
function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants, PLT, and cells and their interactions” is
not clear and could be replaced by the statement ‘’ TEG can provide comprehensive information
about function and amounts of pro-coagulants, anti-coagulants and PLTs as well as their
interactions’’
Page 11, Lines 239-240. Please rephrase the statement  “Notably, Huang et al. only included
the patients with the presence of gastroesophageal varices alone, but we did not limit the
complications or severity of liver cirrhosis” .It could be replaced by  the statement “Notably,
Huang et al.  included only patients with gastroesophageal varices  but we also included patients
with other complications of  liver cirrhosis ”
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