Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 15 Sep 2023
Reviewer:  Satoshi Yamamoto
Reviewer's report:
This is a well-written review of the adverse events of ESWL for pancreatic stone disease.
We recommend that this paper be accepted after minor revisions.
Minor Comments:
1. Reference [2] is inappropriate and on adverse events of ESWL for renal stones. I
recommend referring to Sauerbruch's paper. He was the first in the world to report ESWL for
pancreatolithiasis in 1987.
Sauerbruch T, Holl J, Sackmann M, Werner R, Wotzka R, Paumgartner G. Disintegration of
a pancreatic duct stone with extracorporeal shock waves in a patient with chronic pancreatitis.
Endoscopy. 1987 Sep;19(5):207-8.
2. Reference [7], cited in the indications and contraindications for P-ESWL, is a paper on the
endoscopic management of acute necrotizing pancreatitis, not ESWL for pancreatolithiasis.
Therefore, a change is needed.
In addition to ESGE (PMID: 30654394), guidelines have been published by various
societies, and the International Consensus Guidelines on Chronic Pancreatitis (ICGCP) (PMID:
32792253) (reference [43]), which developed international guidelines for chronic pancreatitis,
and other guidelines (PMID: 31757740, PMID: 21078490, PMID: 26725837 etc)  should be
included in the cited references.
3. For Table 2, the citation source should also be listed in the Table legend.
Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 15 Sep 2023
Reviewer:  Satoshi Yamamoto
Reviewer's report:
This is a well-written review of the adverse events of ESWL for pancreatic stone disease.
We recommend that this paper be accepted after minor revisions.
Minor Comments:
1. Reference [2] is inappropriate and on adverse events of ESWL for renal stones. I
recommend referring to Sauerbruch's paper. He was the first in the world to report ESWL for
pancreatolithiasis in 1987.
Sauerbruch T, Holl J, Sackmann M, Werner R, Wotzka R, Paumgartner G. Disintegration of
a pancreatic duct stone with extracorporeal shock waves in a patient with chronic pancreatitis.
Endoscopy. 1987 Sep;19(5):207-8.
2. Reference [7], cited in the indications and contraindications for P-ESWL, is a paper on the
endoscopic management of acute necrotizing pancreatitis, not ESWL for pancreatolithiasis.
Therefore, a change is needed.
In addition to ESGE (PMID: 30654394), guidelines have been published by various
societies, and the International Consensus Guidelines on Chronic Pancreatitis (ICGCP) (PMID:
32792253) (reference [43]), which developed international guidelines for chronic pancreatitis,
and other guidelines (PMID: 31757740, PMID: 21078490, PMID: 26725837 etc)  should be
included in the cited references.
3. For Table 2, the citation source should also be listed in the Table legend.
Please review this paper.
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Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 15 Sep 2023
Reviewer:  Satoshi Yamamoto
Reviewer's report:
This is a well-written review of the adverse events of ESWL for pancreatic stone disease.
We recommend that this paper be accepted after minor revisions.
Minor Comments:
1. Reference [2] is inappropriate and on adverse events of ESWL for renal stones. I
recommend referring to Sauerbruch's paper. He was the first in the world to report ESWL for
pancreatolithiasis in 1987.
Sauerbruch T, Holl J, Sackmann M, Werner R, Wotzka R, Paumgartner G. Disintegration of
a pancreatic duct stone with extracorporeal shock waves in a patient with chronic pancreatitis.
Endoscopy. 1987 Sep;19(5):207-8.
2. Reference [7], cited in the indications and contraindications for P-ESWL, is a paper on the
endoscopic management of acute necrotizing pancreatitis, not ESWL for pancreatolithiasis.
Therefore, a change is needed.
In addition to ESGE (PMID: 30654394), guidelines have been published by various
societies, and the International Consensus Guidelines on Chronic Pancreatitis (ICGCP) (PMID:
32792253) (reference [43]), which developed international guidelines for chronic pancreatitis,
and other guidelines (PMID: 31757740, PMID: 21078490, PMID: 26725837 etc)  should be
included in the cited references.
3. For Table 2, the citation source should also be listed in the Table legend.
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