Reviewer's report
Title:Risk factors of rotavirus diarrhea in hospitalized children in sanglah
hospital, denpasar: a cohort retrospective study
Version:1Date:8 February 2014
Reviewer: Ketut Dewi Kumara Wati
Reviewer's report:
Major compulsory Revisions
3.1. (p4) Conflicting for definition of inclusion and exclusion . First definition :
patient included in the study have acute diarrhea and those who diarrhea more
than 7 days were excluded. Second definition: in the 3rd para: definition of acute
diarrhea: lasting less than 2 weeks
3.2.(p6).The significant analysis shows male is more …What is the significant
analysis refer to?
3.3.(p12). Table 2. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n after variable
Minor Essentials Revision:
2.1. (p3), Authors should mention what was the software used for Statistical
analysis
2.2. (p15) Figures have no title
2.3 (p12). Tables 2 and after. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n
after variable
Discretional Revision:
1.1 (p1) Authors should give attention on capital letter usage , such as name of
institution on title
1.2 (p3-4). Authors need to give attention on link between sentences, better to
combine two last sentences in the last paragraph
1.3 (p4)first paragraph: need to simplify/shorten paragraph
1.4 (p4 )the grammatical use of English: axilla temperature, better axillary
temperature.
Hand wash behavior , better hand washing behavior
1.5. (p9) SSS. She is the head project , consider : project head or heading the
project ). This might need editing by n house staff.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Reviewer's report
Title:Risk factors of rotavirus diarrhea in hospitalized children in sanglah
hospital, denpasar: a cohort retrospective study
Version:1Date:8 February 2014
Reviewer: Ketut Dewi Kumara Wati
Reviewer's report:
Major compulsory Revisions
3.1. (p4) Conflicting for definition of inclusion and exclusion . First definition :
patient included in the study have acute diarrhea and those who diarrhea more
than 7 days were excluded. Second definition: in the 3rd para: definition of acute
diarrhea: lasting less than 2 weeks
3.2.(p6).The significant analysis shows male is more …What is the significant
analysis refer to?
3.3.(p12). Table 2. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n after variable
Minor Essentials Revision:
2.1. (p3), Authors should mention what was the software used for Statistical
analysis
2.2. (p15) Figures have no title
2.3 (p12). Tables 2 and after. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n
after variable
Discretional Revision:
1.1 (p1) Authors should give attention on capital letter usage , such as name of
institution on title
1.2 (p3-4). Authors need to give attention on link between sentences, better to
combine two last sentences in the last paragraph
1.3 (p4)first paragraph: need to simplify/shorten paragraph
1.4 (p4 )the grammatical use of English: axilla temperature, better axillary
temperature.
Hand wash behavior , better hand washing behavior
1.5. (p9) SSS. She is the head project , consider : project head or heading the
project ). This might need editing by n house staff.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Please review this paper.
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Reviewer's report
Title:Risk factors of rotavirus diarrhea in hospitalized children in sanglah
hospital, denpasar: a cohort retrospective study
Version:1Date:8 February 2014
Reviewer: Ketut Dewi Kumara Wati
Reviewer's report:
Major compulsory Revisions
3.1. (p4) Conflicting for definition of inclusion and exclusion . First definition :
patient included in the study have acute diarrhea and those who diarrhea more
than 7 days were excluded. Second definition: in the 3rd para: definition of acute
diarrhea: lasting less than 2 weeks
3.2.(p6).The significant analysis shows male is more …What is the significant
analysis refer to?
3.3.(p12). Table 2. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n after variable
Minor Essentials Revision:
2.1. (p3), Authors should mention what was the software used for Statistical
analysis
2.2. (p15) Figures have no title
2.3 (p12). Tables 2 and after. Column 1: variable (n=656), consider not add n
after variable
Discretional Revision:
1.1 (p1) Authors should give attention on capital letter usage , such as name of
institution on title
1.2 (p3-4). Authors need to give attention on link between sentences, better to
combine two last sentences in the last paragraph
1.3 (p4)first paragraph: need to simplify/shorten paragraph
1.4 (p4 )the grammatical use of English: axilla temperature, better axillary
temperature.
Hand wash behavior , better hand washing behavior
1.5. (p9) SSS. She is the head project , consider : project head or heading the
project ). This might need editing by n house staff.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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