Reviewer's report
Title:Capsule Colonoscopy Increases Uptake of Colorectal Cancer Screening
Version: 2Date:29 February 2012
Reviewer: Marty M Meyer
Reviewer's report:
Minor essential revisions: misspellings on p 4
Discretionary revisions:
1.) Make a comment about any possible bias introduced by focusing only on one
group covered by a single insurance carrier (economic diversity, tendency to
utilize health care resources, etc.)
2.) Comment on possible impact of free capsule on opportunity to participate in
screening as this would not reflect real world circumstances of screening
3.) p 8, Revise comment speculating sensitivity of capsule colonoscopy. do not
state an estimated percentage, simply state that under routine conditions the
sensitivity may be expected to be lower.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Acceptable
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Reviewer's report
Title:Capsule Colonoscopy Increases Uptake of Colorectal Cancer Screening
Version: 2Date:29 February 2012
Reviewer: Marty M Meyer
Reviewer's report:
Minor essential revisions: misspellings on p 4
Discretionary revisions:
1.) Make a comment about any possible bias introduced by focusing only on one
group covered by a single insurance carrier (economic diversity, tendency to
utilize health care resources, etc.)
2.) Comment on possible impact of free capsule on opportunity to participate in
screening as this would not reflect real world circumstances of screening
3.) p 8, Revise comment speculating sensitivity of capsule colonoscopy. do not
state an estimated percentage, simply state that under routine conditions the
sensitivity may be expected to be lower.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Acceptable
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
Please review this paper.
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Reviewer's report
Title:Capsule Colonoscopy Increases Uptake of Colorectal Cancer Screening
Version: 2Date:29 February 2012
Reviewer: Marty M Meyer
Reviewer's report:
Minor essential revisions: misspellings on p 4
Discretionary revisions:
1.) Make a comment about any possible bias introduced by focusing only on one
group covered by a single insurance carrier (economic diversity, tendency to
utilize health care resources, etc.)
2.) Comment on possible impact of free capsule on opportunity to participate in
screening as this would not reflect real world circumstances of screening
3.) p 8, Revise comment speculating sensitivity of capsule colonoscopy. do not
state an estimated percentage, simply state that under routine conditions the
sensitivity may be expected to be lower.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Acceptable
Statistical review: Yes, but I do not feel adequately qualified to assess the
statistics.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests
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