Title: Level Of Interleukin 17 In Inflammatory Bowel Disease And Its Relation With Disease
Activity
Version: 6 Date: 03 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
This article explores the levels of IL-17 in IBD and the relationship between IL-17 and disease
activity through a cross-sectional study, which I think has been refined a lot by the last revision,
but there are a few areas that are still of some concern.
1. I think it is better to use subheadings to summarize and segment the description of
methodology, as this will make the reading clearer. For the results, I think it also needs to be
segmented using subheadings, followed immediately by the content of the results, with graphical
information, which will make the important parts stand out.
2. In the section discussing differences in IL-17 levels and disease activity, I think that "Serum
level of IL-17 was studied in 50 subjects with CD, there were no UC cases (only 20 patients
were in activity) and 40 healthy control." needs to be specified as the experiment of which study.
It would be better to analyze the possible reasons for the lack of difference.
Overall, I think that the article somewhat explains the purpose of the study and could have been
better with a little consideration of this part of the revision.
Title: Level Of Interleukin 17 In Inflammatory Bowel Disease And Its Relation With Disease
Activity
Version: 6 Date: 03 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
This article explores the levels of IL-17 in IBD and the relationship between IL-17 and disease
activity through a cross-sectional study, which I think has been refined a lot by the last revision,
but there are a few areas that are still of some concern.
1. I think it is better to use subheadings to summarize and segment the description of
methodology, as this will make the reading clearer. For the results, I think it also needs to be
segmented using subheadings, followed immediately by the content of the results, with graphical
information, which will make the important parts stand out.
2. In the section discussing differences in IL-17 levels and disease activity, I think that "Serum
level of IL-17 was studied in 50 subjects with CD, there were no UC cases (only 20 patients
were in activity) and 40 healthy control." needs to be specified as the experiment of which study.
It would be better to analyze the possible reasons for the lack of difference.
Overall, I think that the article somewhat explains the purpose of the study and could have been
better with a little consideration of this part of the revision.
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Level Of Interleukin 17 In Inflammatory Bowel Disease And Its Relation With Disease
Activity
Version: 6 Date: 03 Mar 2024
Reviewer's report:
This article explores the levels of IL-17 in IBD and the relationship between IL-17 and disease
activity through a cross-sectional study, which I think has been refined a lot by the last revision,
but there are a few areas that are still of some concern.
1. I think it is better to use subheadings to summarize and segment the description of
methodology, as this will make the reading clearer. For the results, I think it also needs to be
segmented using subheadings, followed immediately by the content of the results, with graphical
information, which will make the important parts stand out.
2. In the section discussing differences in IL-17 levels and disease activity, I think that "Serum
level of IL-17 was studied in 50 subjects with CD, there were no UC cases (only 20 patients
were in activity) and 40 healthy control." needs to be specified as the experiment of which study.
It would be better to analyze the possible reasons for the lack of difference.
Overall, I think that the article somewhat explains the purpose of the study and could have been
better with a little consideration of this part of the revision.
assistant