Title: Association between lipid accumulation products and gallstones: an analysis of the
National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey 2017-2020
Version: 0 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
Many thanks for granting me the honour to review such an important well designed study.Its a
great study , however i have very few comments
first the paragraphs start at the beginning of lines and no tab is inserted
second in discussion ,line 203 in writing 1 2 3 4, can be written first second third and fourth
"as far as we are aware" may be better as far as we know
in line 206 after "normally" there is a box?
in diabetics there were less gall stones  and also there were more gall stones among younger  ,less
than 40 years old, and both those groups usually have more TG and BMI than younger and non
diabetics ; is there an explanation ?
Thanks once again
I look forewards to receive your comments and corrections
Title: Association between lipid accumulation products and gallstones: an analysis of the
National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey 2017-2020
Version: 0 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
Many thanks for granting me the honour to review such an important well designed study.Its a
great study , however i have very few comments
first the paragraphs start at the beginning of lines and no tab is inserted
second in discussion ,line 203 in writing 1 2 3 4, can be written first second third and fourth
"as far as we are aware" may be better as far as we know
in line 206 after "normally" there is a box?
in diabetics there were less gall stones  and also there were more gall stones among younger  ,less
than 40 years old, and both those groups usually have more TG and BMI than younger and non
diabetics ; is there an explanation ?
Thanks once again
I look forewards to receive your comments and corrections
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Association between lipid accumulation products and gallstones: an analysis of the
National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey 2017-2020
Version: 0 Date: 20 Aug 2024
Reviewer's report:
Many thanks for granting me the honour to review such an important well designed study.Its a
great study , however i have very few comments
first the paragraphs start at the beginning of lines and no tab is inserted
second in discussion ,line 203 in writing 1 2 3 4, can be written first second third and fourth
"as far as we are aware" may be better as far as we know
in line 206 after "normally" there is a box?
in diabetics there were less gall stones  and also there were more gall stones among younger  ,less
than 40 years old, and both those groups usually have more TG and BMI than younger and non
diabetics ; is there an explanation ?
Thanks once again
I look forewards to receive your comments and corrections
assistant