Reviewer's report
Title:Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the Diagnosis and
Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical Manifestations
Version: 1Date:15 April 2013
Reviewer: Philipp Lenz
Reviewer's report:
In the retrospective study " Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the
Diagnosis and Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical
Manifestations”, you report on single-balloon enteroscopy as diagnostic option in
small bowel disease. We agree with you, that more studies are needed to
evaluate the performance of single-balloon enteroscopy. Overall your study
seems somehow confusing and to my opinion it should be revised for clarity and
consistency.
Mayor comment:
1.) Abstract: “Unlike double-balloon enteroscopy, single-balloon enteroscopy
allowed only limited visualization of the entire small intestine.”
No data exist, that support this statement. Some studies report less total
enteroscopy rates for SBE compared to DBE. Nevertheless the capability of both
systems is equal.
2.) Introduction: “To overcome these limitations, SBE was developed by
removing one of the balloons and using the hook/suction-and-pull technique
instead of the balloon on the enteroscope, making it easier for endoscopists to
learn and perform.”
Both balloon-assisted enteroscopy techniques have comparable difficulty levels.
The handling of the endoscope equipped with one balloon was supposed to be
easier, because the susceptance to failure of the second balloon is avoided.
3.) Introduction: However, it remains controversial whether total enteroscopy is
required to increase diagnostic yields and whether its impact on the management
of small bowel diseases are significant.
Please cite: Xin L, Gao Y, Liao Z, Li ZS. The reasonable calculation of complete
enteroscopy rate for balloon-assisted enteroscopy. Endoscopy 2011;43:832.
author reply.
4.) Material and Methods: “In our institute, insertion depth is not measured in
centimeters; hence, in our study, the insertion depth was estimated by the
performers at the end of the procedure in terms of region of depth such as the
proximal jejunum, mid jejunum, distal jejunum, proximal ileum, mid ileum, and
distal ileum.
Please specify how the endoscopists can identify the mentioned regions.
5.) Material and Methods: “Diagnostic yield was defined as a definite diagnosis
and a positive finding that might be associated with the clinical presentation.”
What does the authors means with “positive finding that might be associated …”.
Do they mean “finding that may explain the clinical symptom” ?!
6.) Results: “Of the patients, 22% underwent a retrograde procedure, whereas
77% underwent an antegrade procedure.”
The number of combined enteroscopy procedure, especially those for retrograde
procedure is pretty low. Please explain why !
7.) Results: “Only 1 patient underwent a bidirectional procedure in the same
setting, which was otherwise done as a sequential strategy“.
How many patients were investigated by a combined approach, not in the same
setting, but subsequently ? What was the average time period between both
investigations ?!
8.) Results: “Fluoroscopy was used in 71.7% of the procedures”.
The fluoroscopy rates seem pretty high, why ?
9.) Results: “The mean ± SD procedure duration was 82.4 ± 43.2 minutes. While
the mean procedure duration for the antegrade route was 81.8 ± 41.2 min, that
for the retrograde route was 78.3 ± 34.7 min”.
The procedure times are long, compared to the literature. How did you define the
beginning and the end of the examination ?
10.) Results: “A definite diagnosis was obtained in 32.4% of the patients, and
an overall diagnosis (a definite diagnosis combined with an associated positive
finding) was obtained in 47.6%.”
The diagnostic yield (measured in definite diagnosis or overall diagnosis) is at the
lower level compared to the recent literature. The authors try to explain this fact
with the delay between first clinical symptom and the enteroscopy procedure
(49.3 ± 104.9 days), which is indeed absolutely high and unjustifiable.
Nevertheless they found no statistical difference between both groups.
Furthermore they “analyzed the mean time to enteroscopy between the patients
with clinical success and in those without. The time to enteroscopy in the first
group was 75.97 ± 25.6 days, whereas that in the second group was 29.5 ± 6.6
days”. In patients with overt gastrointestinal bleeding !!!
This is especially interesting because that means, that the time to enteroscopy
was lower in patients without clinical success compared to those with clinical
impact.
To my opinion you should revised the whole passage, explaining
1.) the reason for your high “time to enteroscopy”
2.) the comparison of patients with and without clinical success, especially for
those with gastrointestinal bleeding.
11.) Overall results section:
Please relate your description of the relevant findings to “Xin L, Liao Z, Jiang YP,
Li ZS. Indications, detectability, positive findings, total enteroscopy, and
complications of diagnostic double-balloon endoscopy: a systematic review of
data over the first decade of use. Gastrointest Endosc 2011;74:563–70.”
12.) Discussion: “However, the area of interest was achieved in approximately
80.7% of the time, and an overall diagnosis could be made using these
procedures in approximately 42.8% of the time, which is similar to that in other
SBE studies that reported approximately 37–61%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
13.) Discussion: “In addition, this result was comparable with those of DBE
studies that reported diagnostic yields of approximately 43–52%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
14.) Discussion/Results: Diagnostic yield in overt GI-Bleeding 42.9%
A diagnostic yield less than 50% in overt GI-Bleeding seems pretty low. You tried
to explain the low rate with your long time to enteroscopy. The diagnosis “overt”
GI-bleeding, means that the bleeding was “overt” at the time of the investigation.
To my opinion the “time to enteroscopy” can therefore be no explanation for the
low diagnostic yield within this group !
Overall the study seems pretty honest to me and may therefore be useful to put
the enteroscopy procedure in the perspective of the daily clinical routine, as most
studies are conducted at university centers of tertiary care. In addition to the
comments above I would therefore recommend the authors to describe the
clinical setting in which the investigations were performed.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests.
Reviewer's report
Title:Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the Diagnosis and
Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical Manifestations
Version: 1Date:15 April 2013
Reviewer: Philipp Lenz
Reviewer's report:
In the retrospective study " Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the
Diagnosis and Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical
Manifestations”, you report on single-balloon enteroscopy as diagnostic option in
small bowel disease. We agree with you, that more studies are needed to
evaluate the performance of single-balloon enteroscopy. Overall your study
seems somehow confusing and to my opinion it should be revised for clarity and
consistency.
Mayor comment:
1.) Abstract: “Unlike double-balloon enteroscopy, single-balloon enteroscopy
allowed only limited visualization of the entire small intestine.”
No data exist, that support this statement. Some studies report less total
enteroscopy rates for SBE compared to DBE. Nevertheless the capability of both
systems is equal.
2.) Introduction: “To overcome these limitations, SBE was developed by
removing one of the balloons and using the hook/suction-and-pull technique
instead of the balloon on the enteroscope, making it easier for endoscopists to
learn and perform.”
Both balloon-assisted enteroscopy techniques have comparable difficulty levels.
The handling of the endoscope equipped with one balloon was supposed to be
easier, because the susceptance to failure of the second balloon is avoided.
3.) Introduction: However, it remains controversial whether total enteroscopy is
required to increase diagnostic yields and whether its impact on the management
of small bowel diseases are significant.
Please cite: Xin L, Gao Y, Liao Z, Li ZS. The reasonable calculation of complete
enteroscopy rate for balloon-assisted enteroscopy. Endoscopy 2011;43:832.
author reply.
4.) Material and Methods: “In our institute, insertion depth is not measured in
centimeters; hence, in our study, the insertion depth was estimated by the
performers at the end of the procedure in terms of region of depth such as the
proximal jejunum, mid jejunum, distal jejunum, proximal ileum, mid ileum, and
distal ileum.
Please specify how the endoscopists can identify the mentioned regions.
5.) Material and Methods: “Diagnostic yield was defined as a definite diagnosis
and a positive finding that might be associated with the clinical presentation.”
What does the authors means with “positive finding that might be associated …”.
Do they mean “finding that may explain the clinical symptom” ?!
6.) Results: “Of the patients, 22% underwent a retrograde procedure, whereas
77% underwent an antegrade procedure.”
The number of combined enteroscopy procedure, especially those for retrograde
procedure is pretty low. Please explain why !
7.) Results: “Only 1 patient underwent a bidirectional procedure in the same
setting, which was otherwise done as a sequential strategy“.
How many patients were investigated by a combined approach, not in the same
setting, but subsequently ? What was the average time period between both
investigations ?!
8.) Results: “Fluoroscopy was used in 71.7% of the procedures”.
The fluoroscopy rates seem pretty high, why ?
9.) Results: “The mean ± SD procedure duration was 82.4 ± 43.2 minutes. While
the mean procedure duration for the antegrade route was 81.8 ± 41.2 min, that
for the retrograde route was 78.3 ± 34.7 min”.
The procedure times are long, compared to the literature. How did you define the
beginning and the end of the examination ?
10.) Results: “A definite diagnosis was obtained in 32.4% of the patients, and
an overall diagnosis (a definite diagnosis combined with an associated positive
finding) was obtained in 47.6%.”
The diagnostic yield (measured in definite diagnosis or overall diagnosis) is at the
lower level compared to the recent literature. The authors try to explain this fact
with the delay between first clinical symptom and the enteroscopy procedure
(49.3 ± 104.9 days), which is indeed absolutely high and unjustifiable.
Nevertheless they found no statistical difference between both groups.
Furthermore they “analyzed the mean time to enteroscopy between the patients
with clinical success and in those without. The time to enteroscopy in the first
group was 75.97 ± 25.6 days, whereas that in the second group was 29.5 ± 6.6
days”. In patients with overt gastrointestinal bleeding !!!
This is especially interesting because that means, that the time to enteroscopy
was lower in patients without clinical success compared to those with clinical
impact.
To my opinion you should revised the whole passage, explaining
1.) the reason for your high “time to enteroscopy”
2.) the comparison of patients with and without clinical success, especially for
those with gastrointestinal bleeding.
11.) Overall results section:
Please relate your description of the relevant findings to “Xin L, Liao Z, Jiang YP,
Li ZS. Indications, detectability, positive findings, total enteroscopy, and
complications of diagnostic double-balloon endoscopy: a systematic review of
data over the first decade of use. Gastrointest Endosc 2011;74:563–70.”
12.) Discussion: “However, the area of interest was achieved in approximately
80.7% of the time, and an overall diagnosis could be made using these
procedures in approximately 42.8% of the time, which is similar to that in other
SBE studies that reported approximately 37–61%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
13.) Discussion: “In addition, this result was comparable with those of DBE
studies that reported diagnostic yields of approximately 43–52%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
14.) Discussion/Results: Diagnostic yield in overt GI-Bleeding 42.9%
A diagnostic yield less than 50% in overt GI-Bleeding seems pretty low. You tried
to explain the low rate with your long time to enteroscopy. The diagnosis “overt”
GI-bleeding, means that the bleeding was “overt” at the time of the investigation.
To my opinion the “time to enteroscopy” can therefore be no explanation for the
low diagnostic yield within this group !
Overall the study seems pretty honest to me and may therefore be useful to put
the enteroscopy procedure in the perspective of the daily clinical routine, as most
studies are conducted at university centers of tertiary care. In addition to the
comments above I would therefore recommend the authors to describe the
clinical setting in which the investigations were performed.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests.
Please review this paper.
user
Reviewer's report
Title:Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the Diagnosis and
Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical Manifestations
Version: 1Date:15 April 2013
Reviewer: Philipp Lenz
Reviewer's report:
In the retrospective study " Performance of Single-Balloon Enteroscopy for the
Diagnosis and Management of Small Bowel Disorders Based on Clinical
Manifestations”, you report on single-balloon enteroscopy as diagnostic option in
small bowel disease. We agree with you, that more studies are needed to
evaluate the performance of single-balloon enteroscopy. Overall your study
seems somehow confusing and to my opinion it should be revised for clarity and
consistency.
Mayor comment:
1.) Abstract: “Unlike double-balloon enteroscopy, single-balloon enteroscopy
allowed only limited visualization of the entire small intestine.”
No data exist, that support this statement. Some studies report less total
enteroscopy rates for SBE compared to DBE. Nevertheless the capability of both
systems is equal.
2.) Introduction: “To overcome these limitations, SBE was developed by
removing one of the balloons and using the hook/suction-and-pull technique
instead of the balloon on the enteroscope, making it easier for endoscopists to
learn and perform.”
Both balloon-assisted enteroscopy techniques have comparable difficulty levels.
The handling of the endoscope equipped with one balloon was supposed to be
easier, because the susceptance to failure of the second balloon is avoided.
3.) Introduction: However, it remains controversial whether total enteroscopy is
required to increase diagnostic yields and whether its impact on the management
of small bowel diseases are significant.
Please cite: Xin L, Gao Y, Liao Z, Li ZS. The reasonable calculation of complete
enteroscopy rate for balloon-assisted enteroscopy. Endoscopy 2011;43:832.
author reply.
4.) Material and Methods: “In our institute, insertion depth is not measured in
centimeters; hence, in our study, the insertion depth was estimated by the
performers at the end of the procedure in terms of region of depth such as the
proximal jejunum, mid jejunum, distal jejunum, proximal ileum, mid ileum, and
distal ileum.
Please specify how the endoscopists can identify the mentioned regions.
5.) Material and Methods: “Diagnostic yield was defined as a definite diagnosis
and a positive finding that might be associated with the clinical presentation.”
What does the authors means with “positive finding that might be associated …”.
Do they mean “finding that may explain the clinical symptom” ?!
6.) Results: “Of the patients, 22% underwent a retrograde procedure, whereas
77% underwent an antegrade procedure.”
The number of combined enteroscopy procedure, especially those for retrograde
procedure is pretty low. Please explain why !
7.) Results: “Only 1 patient underwent a bidirectional procedure in the same
setting, which was otherwise done as a sequential strategy“.
How many patients were investigated by a combined approach, not in the same
setting, but subsequently ? What was the average time period between both
investigations ?!
8.) Results: “Fluoroscopy was used in 71.7% of the procedures”.
The fluoroscopy rates seem pretty high, why ?
9.) Results: “The mean ± SD procedure duration was 82.4 ± 43.2 minutes. While
the mean procedure duration for the antegrade route was 81.8 ± 41.2 min, that
for the retrograde route was 78.3 ± 34.7 min”.
The procedure times are long, compared to the literature. How did you define the
beginning and the end of the examination ?
10.) Results: “A definite diagnosis was obtained in 32.4% of the patients, and
an overall diagnosis (a definite diagnosis combined with an associated positive
finding) was obtained in 47.6%.”
The diagnostic yield (measured in definite diagnosis or overall diagnosis) is at the
lower level compared to the recent literature. The authors try to explain this fact
with the delay between first clinical symptom and the enteroscopy procedure
(49.3 ± 104.9 days), which is indeed absolutely high and unjustifiable.
Nevertheless they found no statistical difference between both groups.
Furthermore they “analyzed the mean time to enteroscopy between the patients
with clinical success and in those without. The time to enteroscopy in the first
group was 75.97 ± 25.6 days, whereas that in the second group was 29.5 ± 6.6
days”. In patients with overt gastrointestinal bleeding !!!
This is especially interesting because that means, that the time to enteroscopy
was lower in patients without clinical success compared to those with clinical
impact.
To my opinion you should revised the whole passage, explaining
1.) the reason for your high “time to enteroscopy”
2.) the comparison of patients with and without clinical success, especially for
those with gastrointestinal bleeding.
11.) Overall results section:
Please relate your description of the relevant findings to “Xin L, Liao Z, Jiang YP,
Li ZS. Indications, detectability, positive findings, total enteroscopy, and
complications of diagnostic double-balloon endoscopy: a systematic review of
data over the first decade of use. Gastrointest Endosc 2011;74:563–70.”
12.) Discussion: “However, the area of interest was achieved in approximately
80.7% of the time, and an overall diagnosis could be made using these
procedures in approximately 42.8% of the time, which is similar to that in other
SBE studies that reported approximately 37–61%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
13.) Discussion: “In addition, this result was comparable with those of DBE
studies that reported diagnostic yields of approximately 43–52%.
Which studies do you mean ? Please cite !
14.) Discussion/Results: Diagnostic yield in overt GI-Bleeding 42.9%
A diagnostic yield less than 50% in overt GI-Bleeding seems pretty low. You tried
to explain the low rate with your long time to enteroscopy. The diagnosis “overt”
GI-bleeding, means that the bleeding was “overt” at the time of the investigation.
To my opinion the “time to enteroscopy” can therefore be no explanation for the
low diagnostic yield within this group !
Overall the study seems pretty honest to me and may therefore be useful to put
the enteroscopy procedure in the perspective of the daily clinical routine, as most
studies are conducted at university centers of tertiary care. In addition to the
comments above I would therefore recommend the authors to describe the
clinical setting in which the investigations were performed.
Level of interest: An article whose findings are important to those with closely
related research interests
Quality of written English: Needs some language corrections before being
published
Statistical review: No, the manuscript does not need to be seen by a
statistician.
Declaration of competing interests:
I declare that I have no competing interests.
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