Title: Stereotactic body radiation therapy as an effective local treatment for advanced
hepatocellular carcinoma patients with inferior vena cava and right atrial tumor thrombus
Version: 3 Date: 18 Oct 2022
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript is improved.
In regards to the added section on doses to the organs at risk,
1) a table with more dose metrics and summary statistics for the entire group may be helpful,
if available.
2) Include the maximal doses ( or a dose to smaller volume, eg. 0.5 or 1 cc) when describing
the gastric doses
3)  Include the mean liver (minus GTV) dose for the patients that had decline in liver function
4) Remove mention of Charlie Pan, and instead simplify writing to be more concise and add
reference.
Title: Stereotactic body radiation therapy as an effective local treatment for advanced
hepatocellular carcinoma patients with inferior vena cava and right atrial tumor thrombus
Version: 3 Date: 18 Oct 2022
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript is improved.
In regards to the added section on doses to the organs at risk,
1) a table with more dose metrics and summary statistics for the entire group may be helpful,
if available.
2) Include the maximal doses ( or a dose to smaller volume, eg. 0.5 or 1 cc) when describing
the gastric doses
3)  Include the mean liver (minus GTV) dose for the patients that had decline in liver function
4) Remove mention of Charlie Pan, and instead simplify writing to be more concise and add
reference.
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Stereotactic body radiation therapy as an effective local treatment for advanced
hepatocellular carcinoma patients with inferior vena cava and right atrial tumor thrombus
Version: 3 Date: 18 Oct 2022
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript is improved.
In regards to the added section on doses to the organs at risk,
1) a table with more dose metrics and summary statistics for the entire group may be helpful,
if available.
2) Include the maximal doses ( or a dose to smaller volume, eg. 0.5 or 1 cc) when describing
the gastric doses
3)  Include the mean liver (minus GTV) dose for the patients that had decline in liver function
4) Remove mention of Charlie Pan, and instead simplify writing to be more concise and add
reference.
assistant