Title: Endoscopic and histopathological hints on infections in patients of common variable
immunodeficiency disorder with gastrointestinal symptoms
Version: 4 Date: 16 Oct 2023
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript has improved greatly. I have no remaining major comments. However, as minor,
I suggest
1.  you in STable 1 use again italics as appropriate fir Scientific names of pathogens,
2. in STable 1 do not capitalize  Vitiligo, Psoriasis
3. in p.4/line 6 do not italicize species (x2)
4. on line 16 inflammation--> inflammatory
5. on line 17 add "the" before ileum
6. p.11, l. 5 use "appearance of colon"
7. p.12, l.9:enteropathy "lacks universal definition"
8. l.17: use "other conditions displaying villous atrophy"
9. p. 13, l. 9: rephrase pseudo-polyphonic (term used only/mostly  in music) into a more proper
adjective
10. use "...selective IgA deficiency, giardiasis..."
11. p. 14, line 3: Omit "The"
12. p.15, line 4 onwards: rephrase into ".. will be no definite CVID diagnoses, until the genetic
or other etiopathogenetic causes will defined  for all patients"
13. line 6: rephrase into: Gene analyses (WES/WGS/panel...)
Title: Endoscopic and histopathological hints on infections in patients of common variable
immunodeficiency disorder with gastrointestinal symptoms
Version: 4 Date: 16 Oct 2023
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript has improved greatly. I have no remaining major comments. However, as minor,
I suggest
1.  you in STable 1 use again italics as appropriate fir Scientific names of pathogens,
2. in STable 1 do not capitalize  Vitiligo, Psoriasis
3. in p.4/line 6 do not italicize species (x2)
4. on line 16 inflammation--> inflammatory
5. on line 17 add "the" before ileum
6. p.11, l. 5 use "appearance of colon"
7. p.12, l.9:enteropathy "lacks universal definition"
8. l.17: use "other conditions displaying villous atrophy"
9. p. 13, l. 9: rephrase pseudo-polyphonic (term used only/mostly  in music) into a more proper
adjective
10. use "...selective IgA deficiency, giardiasis..."
11. p. 14, line 3: Omit "The"
12. p.15, line 4 onwards: rephrase into ".. will be no definite CVID diagnoses, until the genetic
or other etiopathogenetic causes will defined  for all patients"
13. line 6: rephrase into: Gene analyses (WES/WGS/panel...)
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Endoscopic and histopathological hints on infections in patients of common variable
immunodeficiency disorder with gastrointestinal symptoms
Version: 4 Date: 16 Oct 2023
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript has improved greatly. I have no remaining major comments. However, as minor,
I suggest
1.  you in STable 1 use again italics as appropriate fir Scientific names of pathogens,
2. in STable 1 do not capitalize  Vitiligo, Psoriasis
3. in p.4/line 6 do not italicize species (x2)
4. on line 16 inflammation--> inflammatory
5. on line 17 add "the" before ileum
6. p.11, l. 5 use "appearance of colon"
7. p.12, l.9:enteropathy "lacks universal definition"
8. l.17: use "other conditions displaying villous atrophy"
9. p. 13, l. 9: rephrase pseudo-polyphonic (term used only/mostly  in music) into a more proper
adjective
10. use "...selective IgA deficiency, giardiasis..."
11. p. 14, line 3: Omit "The"
12. p.15, line 4 onwards: rephrase into ".. will be no definite CVID diagnoses, until the genetic
or other etiopathogenetic causes will defined  for all patients"
13. line 6: rephrase into: Gene analyses (WES/WGS/panel...)
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