Title: Readmission of patients with hypertriglyceridemia-induced acute pancreatitis: A
prospective cohort study
Version: 5 Date: 24 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have addressed the previous corrections adequately. However, I would like to
suggest a few additional minor revisions before the manuscript can be accepted:
1) I suggest summarizing the main demographic characteristics in the first paragraph of the
Results section. For example, including the mean age, the most common sex, and the prevalence
of chronic conditions (e.g., hypertension, diabetes).
2) I recommend dividing Table 1 into two separate tables for better clarity. The first table should
focus on demographic data (e.g., sex, age at diagnosis, body mass index, history of hypertension,
history of diabetes, smoking history, and alcohol intake), while the second table should include
the remaining clinical features (e.g., severity of AP, type of AP, local complications, etc.).
Title: Readmission of patients with hypertriglyceridemia-induced acute pancreatitis: A
prospective cohort study
Version: 5 Date: 24 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have addressed the previous corrections adequately. However, I would like to
suggest a few additional minor revisions before the manuscript can be accepted:
1) I suggest summarizing the main demographic characteristics in the first paragraph of the
Results section. For example, including the mean age, the most common sex, and the prevalence
of chronic conditions (e.g., hypertension, diabetes).
2) I recommend dividing Table 1 into two separate tables for better clarity. The first table should
focus on demographic data (e.g., sex, age at diagnosis, body mass index, history of hypertension,
history of diabetes, smoking history, and alcohol intake), while the second table should include
the remaining clinical features (e.g., severity of AP, type of AP, local complications, etc.).
Please review this paper.
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Title: Readmission of patients with hypertriglyceridemia-induced acute pancreatitis: A
prospective cohort study
Version: 5 Date: 24 Feb 2025
Reviewer's report:
The authors have addressed the previous corrections adequately. However, I would like to
suggest a few additional minor revisions before the manuscript can be accepted:
1) I suggest summarizing the main demographic characteristics in the first paragraph of the
Results section. For example, including the mean age, the most common sex, and the prevalence
of chronic conditions (e.g., hypertension, diabetes).
2) I recommend dividing Table 1 into two separate tables for better clarity. The first table should
focus on demographic data (e.g., sex, age at diagnosis, body mass index, history of hypertension,
history of diabetes, smoking history, and alcohol intake), while the second table should include
the remaining clinical features (e.g., severity of AP, type of AP, local complications, etc.).
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