Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 09 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
1. As this is basically a review it is suggested that the word review may be incorporated into
the title of the article.
2. In the section on Definition and classification of adverse effects there is a Chinese study which
states percentage of individual adverse effects.  Are there any other studies which indicate the
percentage of each adverse effect.
3. Could you elaborate on the mechanism of statetorrhoea and diabetes being protective factors
for development of complications.
4. From your experience and review of literature what are the steps you suggest for preventing
post ESWL complications.
5. The explanation of using a tracking system for ESWL of urinary calculi may not be applicable
to pancreatic calculi as uretric calculi may be mobile in the ureter while pancreatic calculi are
generally adherent to the pancreatic duct.
6. Can you  specify if there are any limitations in literature on this subject.
7.  Certain corrections have to be made with regards to references.
a)  Reference 7 kindly recheck this reference  with the statement that you have made in the test.
Dumonaceau et all have commented on ESWL for CP in ESGE guidelines,
b) Reference 11 Li and co workers 2014 doesnot match with the reference number 11 in the
reference column ( probably number 13 ).
c) As you have followed the Cotton criteria of severity kindly include the same as the reference.
d) Kindly mention the reference  (query 13) on the statement where  individual complications
prevalent has been reported from China.
Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 09 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
1. As this is basically a review it is suggested that the word review may be incorporated into
the title of the article.
2. In the section on Definition and classification of adverse effects there is a Chinese study which
states percentage of individual adverse effects.  Are there any other studies which indicate the
percentage of each adverse effect.
3. Could you elaborate on the mechanism of statetorrhoea and diabetes being protective factors
for development of complications.
4. From your experience and review of literature what are the steps you suggest for preventing
post ESWL complications.
5. The explanation of using a tracking system for ESWL of urinary calculi may not be applicable
to pancreatic calculi as uretric calculi may be mobile in the ureter while pancreatic calculi are
generally adherent to the pancreatic duct.
6. Can you  specify if there are any limitations in literature on this subject.
7.  Certain corrections have to be made with regards to references.
a)  Reference 7 kindly recheck this reference  with the statement that you have made in the test.
Dumonaceau et all have commented on ESWL for CP in ESGE guidelines,
b) Reference 11 Li and co workers 2014 doesnot match with the reference number 11 in the
reference column ( probably number 13 ).
c) As you have followed the Cotton criteria of severity kindly include the same as the reference.
d) Kindly mention the reference  (query 13) on the statement where  individual complications
prevalent has been reported from China.
Please review this paper.
user
Title: Adverse events of pancreatic extracorporeal shock wave lithotripsy: a literature review
Version: 1 Date: 09 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
1. As this is basically a review it is suggested that the word review may be incorporated into
the title of the article.
2. In the section on Definition and classification of adverse effects there is a Chinese study which
states percentage of individual adverse effects.  Are there any other studies which indicate the
percentage of each adverse effect.
3. Could you elaborate on the mechanism of statetorrhoea and diabetes being protective factors
for development of complications.
4. From your experience and review of literature what are the steps you suggest for preventing
post ESWL complications.
5. The explanation of using a tracking system for ESWL of urinary calculi may not be applicable
to pancreatic calculi as uretric calculi may be mobile in the ureter while pancreatic calculi are
generally adherent to the pancreatic duct.
6. Can you  specify if there are any limitations in literature on this subject.
7.  Certain corrections have to be made with regards to references.
a)  Reference 7 kindly recheck this reference  with the statement that you have made in the test.
Dumonaceau et all have commented on ESWL for CP in ESGE guidelines,
b) Reference 11 Li and co workers 2014 doesnot match with the reference number 11 in the
reference column ( probably number 13 ).
c) As you have followed the Cotton criteria of severity kindly include the same as the reference.
d) Kindly mention the reference  (query 13) on the statement where  individual complications
prevalent has been reported from China.
assistant