Title: High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry for Diagnosing Obstructed Defecation Syndrome
Associated with Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy Individuals
Version: 5 Date: 16 Jul 2023
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your effort. However, a few points still require attention:
1. The title is flawed. I suggest the following title "High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry in the
Diagnosis of Obstructed Defecation Syndrome due to Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy
Subjects".
2. The points (3, 9, 13, and 15) were not addressed.
3. I cannot find where you mentioned the Cleveland Clinic score of the PAC-QoL system.
4. The results paragraph in the abstract is too long.
5. The results section is too long. You can summarize it with reference to the tables.
6. Language requires more attention. I suggest using a grammar correction and writing assistance
platform like Grammarly.
Title: High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry for Diagnosing Obstructed Defecation Syndrome
Associated with Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy Individuals
Version: 5 Date: 16 Jul 2023
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your effort. However, a few points still require attention:
1. The title is flawed. I suggest the following title "High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry in the
Diagnosis of Obstructed Defecation Syndrome due to Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy
Subjects".
2. The points (3, 9, 13, and 15) were not addressed.
3. I cannot find where you mentioned the Cleveland Clinic score of the PAC-QoL system.
4. The results paragraph in the abstract is too long.
5. The results section is too long. You can summarize it with reference to the tables.
6. Language requires more attention. I suggest using a grammar correction and writing assistance
platform like Grammarly.
Please review this paper.
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Title: High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry for Diagnosing Obstructed Defecation Syndrome
Associated with Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy Individuals
Version: 5 Date: 16 Jul 2023
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for your effort. However, a few points still require attention:
1. The title is flawed. I suggest the following title "High-Resolution Anorectal Manometry in the
Diagnosis of Obstructed Defecation Syndrome due to Moderate Rectocele Compared to Healthy
Subjects".
2. The points (3, 9, 13, and 15) were not addressed.
3. I cannot find where you mentioned the Cleveland Clinic score of the PAC-QoL system.
4. The results paragraph in the abstract is too long.
5. The results section is too long. You can summarize it with reference to the tables.
6. Language requires more attention. I suggest using a grammar correction and writing assistance
platform like Grammarly.
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